| This is the chapter 1 to my short story. I still don't know how many chapters I'm gonna do yet but so far I have chapters 1 and 2. For now I'm just gonna put this chapter, but if you like what you've read so far then e-mail me your opinion on what you liked and what you didn't like and wether or not I should post chapter 2 up. I've written short stories before but I've never finished them. This is my first real story. I would say my description skills need more work. But hey thats just me. So yea tell me what you guys think on it.